Romeo and Juliet *Acrostic Challenge
Romeo, the one and only, the love of my life
One not blind could see that with utmost clarity
Meaningful, dedicated, passionate and whole
Everlasting love, a love meant to be
Overly into each other, it hurt to be apart
All parties must come to an end as did our play
Not what we originally thought
Death, I mean really, who would of thought?
Juliet and her Romeo together in a different arena
Understand, such love stays true in both life and death
Lie together, the two of us, separate from the earth
In the end still together
Endlessly and forever
Together and in love
Christina Bledsoe
Authors Comment:
This was not my challenge so I really had to think on this, I think it is seriously inadequate compared to Sandys who presented this challenge, but its what I came up with. Feel free to be honest with your opinions.
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Christina, you never have to apologize for what you write nor does your writing need to be compared to anothers. We all different here and thank the Lord for that. You are a very good writer and it is not necessary to explain yourself or what you write to anyone. If what you write is from your heart and is the best that you can do then never is an apology necessary to your readers. Some people will like it and some people won’t. That is just the way of the world. Of course we would like everyone to like what we write but that is just an unattainable gold. Be glad for the other half that like what you write, and write for yourself and them. The remainder just have no taste is the way I like to think of it…HAHAHA… No, this is excellent. And yes, it is much tougher not to be the one who comes up with the acrostic challenge than it is to be the one starting it. I will have to work on mine tomorrow. I had completely forgot about it. Thanks for reminding me. And this is a very good poem, as I told you already. No apologies necessary or warranted.
Thank you Tim. I hadn’t forgotten about it, its just that I didn’t think I could come up with anything and Sandy has always contributed to my acrostic challenges so I couldn’t let her down. I still think this is useless compared to Sandy’s, but I thank you for your kind comments. We are all different, some better than others and this one goes to Sandy. I am really looking forward to reading your creation as I know, as always, it will be absolutely fabulous
Thank you for your time and comments friend.
Wow, I must be tired. I can’t even write a sentence without leaving out a word or two here and there. My apologies. “We are all different”, not “We all different”. I had best read what I write before posting I think!! “Unattainable gold”, what the hell is that? Oy vay. That is it, I am about ready for bed I think….”Unattainable goal”. I should have just started all over again, I think.
See what happens to the mind when you get old!! HAHAHA…
OMG Tim, you are CRACKING me up! I figured you were tired
I think you did a wonderful job!!! Helluva lot better than I could EVER do…..great work once again Christina!!!
Thank you sweet Susy